句式变化
Varying Sentence Structure
通过嵌入从句、使用同位语、变化句子长度等技巧，扩展、合并和精简句子，以增强表达意义、吸引读者并体现风格。
Expand, combine, and reduce sentences for meaning, reader interest, and style, using techniques such as embedding clauses, using appositives, and varying sentence length
学习证据 / Evidence
- 运用从属结构把两个简单句合并成一个复合句
- 通过添加描述性短语和从句来扩展简单句
- 通过删除冗余词语来精简冗长的句子，同时保持原意
- Combine two simple sentences into one complex sentence using subordination
- Expand a simple sentence by adding descriptive phrases and clauses
- Reduce wordy sentences by removing redundant words while preserving meaning
评估问题 / Assessment
当{{name}}修改自己的写作时，他们能否把一个很长的句子拆分开，或者把三个简短生硬的句子合并成一句——选择最适合读者的版本？
When {{name}} revises their writing, can they take a very long sentence and split it up, or take three short choppy sentences and combine them into one — choosing the version that reads best for the audience?