修改与编辑（7岁以上）
Revising and editing (age 7+)
通过评估写作效果来评价和修改文章，提出语法和用词方面的修改建议以增强一致性，并按照三至四年级水平校对拼写、语法和标点错误。
Evaluate and edit writing by assessing effectiveness, proposing changes to grammar and vocabulary for consistency, and proof-reading for spelling, grammar and punctuation errors at Y3-4 level
学习证据 / Evidence
- 朗读自己或同伴的作文，并就词汇或句子结构提出具体的改进建议。
- 提出语法和用词方面的修改建议，以提高整篇文章的清晰度和一致性。
- 按照三至四年级水平校对作文中的拼写、标点和语法错误，并独立改正。
- Read own or a peer's writing aloud and suggest specific improvements to vocabulary or sentence structure
- Propose changes to grammar and word choice to improve clarity and consistency across a piece of writing
- Proof-read writing at Y3-4 level for spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors and correct them independently
评估问题 / Assessment
当{{name}}重新查看一篇写作草稿时，能够通过选择更精准的用词、修正前后不一致的时态，以及改正拼写和标点错误来改进它吗？
When {{name}} revisits a draft piece of writing, can they improve it — changing word choices to be more precise, fixing inconsistent tenses, and correcting spelling and punctuation errors?