回应写作反馈
Responding to Writing Feedback
在教师指导下，大声重读自己的习作，检查读起来是否顺口；倾听并回应老师或同伴提出的问题和建议，补充细节、把意思表达清楚，并完善写作。这是写作自我评价的起步阶段，需要引导，还不是独立技能。
With teacher guidance, re-read own writing aloud to check it sounds right; listen and respond to questions and suggestions from teacher or peers to add detail, clarify meaning, and strengthen writing — this is the scaffolded beginning of writing self-evaluation, not an independent skill
学习证据 / Evidence
- 重读自己的习作，找出漏掉的词或意思不清楚的句子。
- 回答一个问题来补充细节（如：“你能再多说一点关于……吗？”）。
- 根据反馈对一篇习作至少做出一处改进。
- Reread own writing and spot a missing word or unclear sentence
- Add a detail in response to a question (e.g. 'Can you tell me more about...?')
- Make at least one improvement to a piece based on feedback
评估问题 / Assessment
当老师让 {{name}} 大声朗读自己的习作，并问“这部分讲得通吗？”时，{{name}} 能根据这个反馈做出一个简单的修改，把习作改得更好吗？
When {{name}}'s teacher asks them to read their own writing aloud and then asks "does that bit make sense?", can {{name}} listen to the feedback and make a simple change to improve it?