清晰使用代词
Pronouns for clarity
为清晰和衔接选择合适的代词,避免歧义和重复;正确使用反身代词(如 myself、ourselves、himself)。
Choose pronouns for clarity and cohesion, avoiding ambiguity and repetition; use reflexive pronouns correctly (e.g., myself, ourselves, himself)
学习证据 / Evidence
- 用代词替换重复出现的名词,提升衔接性:把“Sam picked up Sam's bag”改写为“Sam picked up his bag”。
- 在句子中正确使用反身代词(例如“I made it myself”、“They helped themselves”)。
- 识别并修正指代不清的代词(例如“Tom told Jack he was late”——谁迟到了?)。
- Replace repeated nouns with pronouns to improve cohesion: rewrite 'Sam picked up Sam's bag' as 'Sam picked up his bag'
- Use reflexive pronouns correctly in sentences (e.g. 'I made it myself', 'They helped themselves')
- Identify and fix ambiguous pronoun references (e.g. 'Tom told Jack he was late' — who was late?)
评估问题 / Assessment
当 {{name}} 写一段关于两个人的文章(比如故事中的两个角色)时,是否把“he”、“she”和“they”用得很清楚,让你总能知道说的是谁?
When {{name}} writes a paragraph about two people — like two characters in a story — do they use "he", "she", and "they" clearly enough that you always know who is being talked about?