段落内衔接
Cohesion within paragraphs
在段落内使用衔接手段——包括代词、状语(如then, after that, firstly)和同义词——来连接句子,形成连贯的思路
Use cohesive devices within a paragraph — including pronouns, adverbials (then, after that, firstly), and synonyms — to link sentences and build a coherent flow of ideas
学习证据 / Evidence
- 用代词或同义词替换重复出现的名词,以保持衔接且不产生歧义,例如:“The explorer found a cave. She examined it carefully”
- 使用表示顺序的状语(firstly, then, next, finally)和表示因果的状语(therefore, as a result, consequently)来连接段落内的想法
- 识别段落中衔接不畅的地方,并插入适当的连接手段以改善流畅性
- Replace repeated nouns with pronouns or synonyms to maintain cohesion without ambiguity, e.g. 'The explorer found a cave. She examined it carefully'
- Use adverbials of sequence (firstly, then, next, finally) and cause (therefore, as a result, consequently) to connect ideas within a paragraph
- Identify where cohesion breaks down in a paragraph and insert appropriate linking devices to improve the flow
评估问题 / Assessment
当{{name}}写一个段落时,句子之间是否流畅衔接——使用像“however”、“after this”或“in contrast”这样的词语来连接想法,而不是每句话都以“And then”开头?
When {{name}} writes a paragraph, do the sentences flow together smoothly — using words like "however", "after this", or "in contrast" to link ideas, rather than every sentence starting with "And then"?