修改和编辑（8岁及以上）

独立、批判地重读自己写的内容，留意哪里意思不清楚、哪个词可以更有力、或读者可能会困惑；不需要老师提醒，自己判断哪些地方可行、哪些地方需要修改，然后动手修改。

Read back your own writing critically and independently — notice where meaning is unclear, where a word could be stronger, or where the reader might be confused; make revisions without needing teacher prompts, using your own judgment about what is and isn't working

学习证据 / Evidence

• 默读一个段落，并独立找出至少一处意思可以更清楚或用词可以改进的地方。
• 做出超出拼写和标点范围的修改——为让句子更清晰或表达效果更好而改写句子。
• 用自己的话解释修改的原因（例如“我觉得读者可能不明白我想表达的意思”）。

• Reread a paragraph silently and independently identify at least one place where meaning could be clearer or a word choice improved
• Make a revision that goes beyond spelling/punctuation — changing a sentence for clarity or effect
• Explain in their own words why they changed something ('I thought the reader wouldn't understand what I meant')

评估问题 / Assessment

{{name}}能否在没有您或老师指出的情况下，完全靠自己重读所写的内容——比如故事、报告、信件——并发现其中不太对劲或可以写得更好的地方？

Can {{name}} read back something they've written — a story, a report, a letter — and spot a part that isn't quite right or could be better, all by themselves without you or a teacher pointing it out?